I love the way this is framed. Catching them "in step" sets a rhythm that I find appealing. I keep wanting to move them forward a little so they are somewhere between the door and windows. However, if you had waited you probably would have missed the "in step" part of this image.
I don't know much about B&W. To my unpracticed eye, it seems as if you've managed a pleasing balance of tones. I particularly like the way the black of the BEATRIX Market canopy balances the dark tones in the top of the two windows.